
Do you think my story is good?
Wow!!! Great story! Especially for a 12-year old, I can bet you’re in honors classes.
When you finish the story PLEASE email me a copy
I read the whole thing
I got some spelling errors:
She saw countless graves, countless names, and she cried countless tears.
You used the word countless too much maybe someone will like that, but just pointing it out. countless tears made it sound funny.
“We have your best interests at heart,” she said, “We are just trying to help you. Well, we have to go the other dungeons now.”
I forgot what was wrong with this one ^^ -_-
“I was kidnapped,” he said, “And totured. I watched many die.”
you spelled “totured” wrong it’s tortured (pretty sure you know that but…)
Other than that, you’re good. you should show it to your language arts teacher, and she will maybe say something like “WOW you know you can publish it?”
I see in my book kids littler than you publishing books, and selling them.
You sound like a book writer
My email is aaronortega007@gmail.com – please email me a copy of your whole story.
thanks
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Jenny
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Jenny
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Jenny
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Jenny
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Jenny
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